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Posted: 05 Dec 2006, 08:53
by pack raptor
Well, why didn't you just write "Yes, I know that you're shocked. I would be if I were in your shoes."
Posted: 05 Dec 2006, 13:04
by Dino_Slayer
Pants means the same thing, I think. Or I'm mixing it with something far more dirty. /tongue.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":P" border="0" alt="tongue.gif" />
Nothing that isn't impossible to fix, though. Thanks for the suggestion. (mistake fixed)
Posted: 05 Dec 2006, 17:00
by SSJDinoTycoon42
On my first read through I notice one thing. It appears that you to need to improve on the speech of your characters. As I read the dialogue, it's difficult to imagine someone talking like that normally.
I can't comment on much more at the moment. Nice work though.
Posted: 06 Dec 2006, 09:25
by Dino_Slayer
SSJDinoTycoon42 wrote:QUOTE (SSJDinoTycoon42 @ 12.05.2006 21:01) On my first read through I notice one thing. It appears that you to need to improve on the speech of your characters. As I read the dialogue, it's difficult to imagine someone talking like that normally.
I can't comment on much more at the moment. Nice work though.
I made it so the characters are often sarcastic to eachother in the fairly deadly situations, their shared way of relieving the stress caused by carnivorous centipedes and giant Raptors. /tongue.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":P" border="0" alt="tongue.gif" />
Glad to hear that you're still enjoying it. /cool.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="B)" border="0" alt="cool.gif" />