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Im Back,
Great to see so much interest in the making of this script,
There Have been alot of gret topics and thoughts!
Im Thinking this... As far as the movies go site B has not been explained and neither has nublar. I beleive we need to go ahead and start this script! here are my suggestions,
Start movie out with one of theses scenes (the first has a little dialogue)
a) a desolate beach in souwestern costa rica, a large massive reptillian body is found on the beach by locals. Richard Levine is Notified of this find while in Costa rica by Marty Guitierrez a man he has just recently met while on this trip to costa rica. On a helicopter ride to the site we find out that levine (he beleives that there are actually still dinosaurs walking the earth but they are just secluded and havent been found.--- Im not sure as to how and make this known to the audience) is a dino fanatic with alot of money, this is why he is in costa rica; he states that
"I have heard of large lizards being found here that are unexplainable!
Marty Guitierrez: Yes but I have only seen a few and they are small,... Little green lizards about 8 to 10 inches tall, They stand on there hind legs!
(Marty and Levine will have just met and levine is in awe with this man because he has found what is most likley a dinosaur)
Levine: I know I read about it in popular science! That is so great!!! is that what were going to see today?
Guitierrez: ....Oh no my friend today we are going to see some thing I have only been hearing about in the last month or so!
Levine: Whats that?
Guitierrez: Nobody knows what it is, from what I hear though; theses new ones they've found have been six to eight meters in length!
Levine:..... LIZARDS? !
Guitierrez: Yup.... (awkward puase as levine mouths the word ... dinosaur ... in a thinking daze) no scientist have sceen a large one! The Government keeps destroying them before we can get to them!
Levine: Why would they do that? Don't they know that This is the most important finds of the century ( levine does not realize or know of Nublar or sorna or there incidents, The only thing he knows of is The incident with a tyranosaur escaping containment from a lab in san diego,or so he had heard... It turns out that the government has covered up hammond's goof up,.. to keep the public in line, all thats known of the island are is rummors and myths only a select few know!)
Guitierrez explains to levine why the government is covering this up (costa rica is a tourist based economy, the last thing it needs is gigantic lizards) and also explains that none of these larger animals have been seen alive only dead he explaines where four others have been found! The helicopter lands and levine begins to take pictures of the dead dino.. Guitierrez and the pilot are in shock as they watch levine take pictures! Levine begins to examine the body but is detured by the stinch and flies around the carcas! (he's kinda sissy) Levine calls for guitierrez to come and cut a chunck of flesh for analysis, Guitierres sighs but complies with levine!
b.) a village in southern costa rica where a child has been attacked but lived. (keep in mind that the thought of costa rica being infested has not been brought about in the movies) The sceen will show a young child playing with other children (hide and Seek) they would all be in the forest away from supervision... The Kids will all
disperse to there hiding spots and one child will go to far... The ensuing sceen is the childs voice heard screeming by the parents in the village! Parents drop there belongins and what they were working on to go and see what has happened as well as the other children in the woods! The next shot would be of two young girls ariving at the young boys body as it is being attacked. the girls screem and the little green unknown dinos run off (compys) Parents arrive and the children begin describing what has happend (this sceen will be done in sub titles to add realism)
There should be an erie suspensful mood to this sceen with low music and a feeling of tension in the boy, before ventureing to his hiding place. This can be added by a warning from one of the other children he passes on way to his hiding spot, as he and others know of attacks in niegboring villages
c) an airplane is seen flying at low altitude over a dense forest. the plane breaks away from the jungle and over a vast open valley the camera pans back away from the plane revealing many dinosaurs grazing, all herbovores, hadrosaurs tikes, apatosours, onboard the plane are three people, Dodgson, King, and Baselton, (description of characters will come later, conversation on the plane leads us to find out that dodgson is the pilot but king and baselton remain nameless) We find through convesation that their plan is to capture dinosaur eggs and transfer them back to there biosyn lab in Wyoming! (made up the wyoming part) They are just obseving the island before they go back and organize there expedition, Dodgson expects to be able to collect 7 species of dinosaur egg with in one hour.. thats the plan any way!!
Or maybe a combo of two or all of them... srry that scene 'A' is so long i was just trying to show some dialogue!
Tell me what you guys think! I still Have some Ideas And I can also try and come up with some dialogue for scenes you guys like as well! srry if i spelled any thing wrong.. i was in a hurry
Great to see so much interest in the making of this script,
There Have been alot of gret topics and thoughts!
Im Thinking this... As far as the movies go site B has not been explained and neither has nublar. I beleive we need to go ahead and start this script! here are my suggestions,
Start movie out with one of theses scenes (the first has a little dialogue)
a) a desolate beach in souwestern costa rica, a large massive reptillian body is found on the beach by locals. Richard Levine is Notified of this find while in Costa rica by Marty Guitierrez a man he has just recently met while on this trip to costa rica. On a helicopter ride to the site we find out that levine (he beleives that there are actually still dinosaurs walking the earth but they are just secluded and havent been found.--- Im not sure as to how and make this known to the audience) is a dino fanatic with alot of money, this is why he is in costa rica; he states that
"I have heard of large lizards being found here that are unexplainable!
Marty Guitierrez: Yes but I have only seen a few and they are small,... Little green lizards about 8 to 10 inches tall, They stand on there hind legs!
(Marty and Levine will have just met and levine is in awe with this man because he has found what is most likley a dinosaur)
Levine: I know I read about it in popular science! That is so great!!! is that what were going to see today?
Guitierrez: ....Oh no my friend today we are going to see some thing I have only been hearing about in the last month or so!
Levine: Whats that?
Guitierrez: Nobody knows what it is, from what I hear though; theses new ones they've found have been six to eight meters in length!
Levine:..... LIZARDS? !
Guitierrez: Yup.... (awkward puase as levine mouths the word ... dinosaur ... in a thinking daze) no scientist have sceen a large one! The Government keeps destroying them before we can get to them!
Levine: Why would they do that? Don't they know that This is the most important finds of the century ( levine does not realize or know of Nublar or sorna or there incidents, The only thing he knows of is The incident with a tyranosaur escaping containment from a lab in san diego,or so he had heard... It turns out that the government has covered up hammond's goof up,.. to keep the public in line, all thats known of the island are is rummors and myths only a select few know!)
Guitierrez explains to levine why the government is covering this up (costa rica is a tourist based economy, the last thing it needs is gigantic lizards) and also explains that none of these larger animals have been seen alive only dead he explaines where four others have been found! The helicopter lands and levine begins to take pictures of the dead dino.. Guitierrez and the pilot are in shock as they watch levine take pictures! Levine begins to examine the body but is detured by the stinch and flies around the carcas! (he's kinda sissy) Levine calls for guitierrez to come and cut a chunck of flesh for analysis, Guitierres sighs but complies with levine!
b.) a village in southern costa rica where a child has been attacked but lived. (keep in mind that the thought of costa rica being infested has not been brought about in the movies) The sceen will show a young child playing with other children (hide and Seek) they would all be in the forest away from supervision... The Kids will all
disperse to there hiding spots and one child will go to far... The ensuing sceen is the childs voice heard screeming by the parents in the village! Parents drop there belongins and what they were working on to go and see what has happened as well as the other children in the woods! The next shot would be of two young girls ariving at the young boys body as it is being attacked. the girls screem and the little green unknown dinos run off (compys) Parents arrive and the children begin describing what has happend (this sceen will be done in sub titles to add realism)
There should be an erie suspensful mood to this sceen with low music and a feeling of tension in the boy, before ventureing to his hiding place. This can be added by a warning from one of the other children he passes on way to his hiding spot, as he and others know of attacks in niegboring villages
c) an airplane is seen flying at low altitude over a dense forest. the plane breaks away from the jungle and over a vast open valley the camera pans back away from the plane revealing many dinosaurs grazing, all herbovores, hadrosaurs tikes, apatosours, onboard the plane are three people, Dodgson, King, and Baselton, (description of characters will come later, conversation on the plane leads us to find out that dodgson is the pilot but king and baselton remain nameless) We find through convesation that their plan is to capture dinosaur eggs and transfer them back to there biosyn lab in Wyoming! (made up the wyoming part) They are just obseving the island before they go back and organize there expedition, Dodgson expects to be able to collect 7 species of dinosaur egg with in one hour.. thats the plan any way!!
Or maybe a combo of two or all of them... srry that scene 'A' is so long i was just trying to show some dialogue!
Tell me what you guys think! I still Have some Ideas And I can also try and come up with some dialogue for scenes you guys like as well! srry if i spelled any thing wrong.. i was in a hurry
Last edited by chase on 30 Jul 2005, 21:16, edited 1 time in total.
Hey does anyone remember the scene in the novel, JP, where the compy's are huddling around a baby's crib and then the nurse walks in to find that the new born baby has had its face eaten...
This could be used as a scene or mentioned somtime in JP4..., I mean, it was even based on the Compy's that had escaped from the island and into Costa Rica...
So why not throw in something as startling and horrifying as this one?
This could be used as a scene or mentioned somtime in JP4..., I mean, it was even based on the Compy's that had escaped from the island and into Costa Rica...
So why not throw in something as startling and horrifying as this one?
Last edited by nissin on 30 Jul 2005, 21:34, edited 1 time in total.
Sure Thing! It Could actually be an opening sceen...
If i remember right the midwife is helping the mother and then the baby is eaten.. Dead babies are really creepy... any the mid wife or nurse ends up righting off the dead baby as sudden death syndrome! so that she does'nt get in trouble! further covering up the story in fact that ties in well with my hide and seek sceene... the Adults in the village can be talking about the deats and bites in the other villages.. setting the suspense for the kid geting attacked.. I would like to incorperate all the sceenes i did above!
If i remember right the midwife is helping the mother and then the baby is eaten.. Dead babies are really creepy... any the mid wife or nurse ends up righting off the dead baby as sudden death syndrome! so that she does'nt get in trouble! further covering up the story in fact that ties in well with my hide and seek sceene... the Adults in the village can be talking about the deats and bites in the other villages.. setting the suspense for the kid geting attacked.. I would like to incorperate all the sceenes i did above!
Actually, I think another good opening scene is the one in the Novel, where we start of on Costa Rica with that docter..., its a raining night..., foggy and stuff...
Then the helicopter comes through the horrible weaher, lands on the island... and people rush in looking for help with the body of a "badly mauled teenaged guy"...
Remember, here Ed Regis ( I think), says it was a construction accident, when in fact it was a raptor attack...
(more details in the Novel, Jurassic Park, written by Michael Cricton..., its somewhere in the beginning of the book)...
--next scene--
You can show the scene of the new born baby..., and then eventually carry onto the scene of the hide and seek game...
Hm yeah... so I hope that helps...
Then the helicopter comes through the horrible weaher, lands on the island... and people rush in looking for help with the body of a "badly mauled teenaged guy"...
Remember, here Ed Regis ( I think), says it was a construction accident, when in fact it was a raptor attack...
(more details in the Novel, Jurassic Park, written by Michael Cricton..., its somewhere in the beginning of the book)...
--next scene--
You can show the scene of the new born baby..., and then eventually carry onto the scene of the hide and seek game...
Hm yeah... so I hope that helps...
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