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- Aquatic_Spinosaurus
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That was awsome, I have another one. Hope you don't mind me copying the way you wrote yours.
This is for the PS2 version, and I say it's Site B when it was actually a park, but I made it look like site B.
The following carnivoirs roamed the Park: Velociraptor, Spinosaurus, Carcharadontosaurus, Albertosaurus.
Name of story: Isla Carnivoir
Site B was at ease, the carnivoirs where happily roaming their territorys.
The silence of the Albertosaurus territory was suddenly broken by the loud sound of a helicopter flying over-head, the medium sized carnivoirs ran in a flurry of panic into the raptor territory and caused the pack of raptors to break into the herbivoir land.
The herbivoirs lived on a long stretch of mountainless land, filled with Paleo trees. The raptors took advantage of this heap of vegitation to camoflage themselves so they could prepair an attack, there was a helplessly ill Oranosaurus limping across an open patch of land.
The poor dinosaur was sick with Bumblefoot, and had just fallen to sleep when the raptors started closing in all around it.
The pack leader made the other raptors stay hidden in the tree's, keeping the herbivoir compleatly surrounded.
The raptors had hunger in their eyes, they hadn't eaten in 3 months because of the spinosaurus constantly stealing their food supply...but now it seemed they would finally eat a decent meal.
The pack leader charged and attacked the Oranosaurus, followed by the 7 other raptors. The herbivoir collapsed to the ground and died, the raptors eating it rapidly to get the food they needed before a bigger predator came to scavange off their kill.
Lucky for them they ate it all before the Carcharadontosaurus showed up, she hadn't eaten in 5 months because of the the Spinosaurus...and she'd lost her territory to the foul beast aswell.
The Carcharadontosaurus then saw the pack of raptors leaving the kill-site after they had their fill, there was nothing left...so she'd have to go hungry again, or kill a rpator...which she'd tried before and didn't like too much.
She had been attacked badly by the pack after she grabbed their last leader, so it was no use trying again.
The sound of humans talking where heard over the hilly terrain, the Carcharadontosaurus explored the scene and found plenty off food in the cleaners.
After she had her fill the Spinosaurus showed up and chased her away again, then began to make this new area her territory also.
More soon!
This is for the PS2 version, and I say it's Site B when it was actually a park, but I made it look like site B.
The following carnivoirs roamed the Park: Velociraptor, Spinosaurus, Carcharadontosaurus, Albertosaurus.
Name of story: Isla Carnivoir
Site B was at ease, the carnivoirs where happily roaming their territorys.
The silence of the Albertosaurus territory was suddenly broken by the loud sound of a helicopter flying over-head, the medium sized carnivoirs ran in a flurry of panic into the raptor territory and caused the pack of raptors to break into the herbivoir land.
The herbivoirs lived on a long stretch of mountainless land, filled with Paleo trees. The raptors took advantage of this heap of vegitation to camoflage themselves so they could prepair an attack, there was a helplessly ill Oranosaurus limping across an open patch of land.
The poor dinosaur was sick with Bumblefoot, and had just fallen to sleep when the raptors started closing in all around it.
The pack leader made the other raptors stay hidden in the tree's, keeping the herbivoir compleatly surrounded.
The raptors had hunger in their eyes, they hadn't eaten in 3 months because of the spinosaurus constantly stealing their food supply...but now it seemed they would finally eat a decent meal.
The pack leader charged and attacked the Oranosaurus, followed by the 7 other raptors. The herbivoir collapsed to the ground and died, the raptors eating it rapidly to get the food they needed before a bigger predator came to scavange off their kill.
Lucky for them they ate it all before the Carcharadontosaurus showed up, she hadn't eaten in 5 months because of the the Spinosaurus...and she'd lost her territory to the foul beast aswell.
The Carcharadontosaurus then saw the pack of raptors leaving the kill-site after they had their fill, there was nothing left...so she'd have to go hungry again, or kill a rpator...which she'd tried before and didn't like too much.
She had been attacked badly by the pack after she grabbed their last leader, so it was no use trying again.
The sound of humans talking where heard over the hilly terrain, the Carcharadontosaurus explored the scene and found plenty off food in the cleaners.
After she had her fill the Spinosaurus showed up and chased her away again, then began to make this new area her territory also.
More soon!
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- Aquatic_Spinosaurus
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Continued!
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The carchardontosaurus ran into the albertosaurus enclosure and killed them, moved into the raptor enclosure and was attacked by an angry ankylosaurus.
She gained a horrible injury and limped to the nearest water supply for a drink, when out of nowhere the raptors attacked her and nearly killed her.
She stumbled infront of the park entrance in a comatose state, her health was extreamly poor.
The sound of a ranger helicopter over head was heard, she felt a quick shot of pain and then rised in full health.
But then she was sedated and awakened to find herself in a fenced enclosure with another carchardontosaurus, she heard the roars of the two angry spiosaurus next to their enclosure.
The old female spinosaurus had lost a fight and was charged into anorpart of her enclosure, new albertosaurus where living in a small enclosure right next to the park entrance, happily feeding.
A small 2x2 enclosure with a hatchery being the only visible object in it was on the opposite side of the park entrance, sounds of raptors calling and attacking cows where heard.
The Site B had been restored, but what will happen if another storm strikes...and with two times more carnivoirs inside the park?
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The Site B lasted 2 years, the park lasted 1 year. The raptors died of old age, the albertosaurus died of malnutrition and many herbivoirs also died of malnutrition.
The carchardontosaurus lived even after the site B was back to being a ruined park, another storm struck the island and released the remaining hebivoirs and carchardontosaurus. The two spinosaurus died because of their fighting and the twister killing one.
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The carchardontosaurus ran into the albertosaurus enclosure and killed them, moved into the raptor enclosure and was attacked by an angry ankylosaurus.
She gained a horrible injury and limped to the nearest water supply for a drink, when out of nowhere the raptors attacked her and nearly killed her.
She stumbled infront of the park entrance in a comatose state, her health was extreamly poor.
The sound of a ranger helicopter over head was heard, she felt a quick shot of pain and then rised in full health.
But then she was sedated and awakened to find herself in a fenced enclosure with another carchardontosaurus, she heard the roars of the two angry spiosaurus next to their enclosure.
The old female spinosaurus had lost a fight and was charged into anorpart of her enclosure, new albertosaurus where living in a small enclosure right next to the park entrance, happily feeding.
A small 2x2 enclosure with a hatchery being the only visible object in it was on the opposite side of the park entrance, sounds of raptors calling and attacking cows where heard.
The Site B had been restored, but what will happen if another storm strikes...and with two times more carnivoirs inside the park?
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end
The Site B lasted 2 years, the park lasted 1 year. The raptors died of old age, the albertosaurus died of malnutrition and many herbivoirs also died of malnutrition.
The carchardontosaurus lived even after the site B was back to being a ruined park, another storm struck the island and released the remaining hebivoirs and carchardontosaurus. The two spinosaurus died because of their fighting and the twister killing one.
- Aquatic_Spinosaurus
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I had an island with 50 raptors, 5 rexes and 5 Acro's.
A twister struck the park and destroyed a section of the raptor enclosure (which was half the size of the island), about 25 raptors escaped and lived in hiding.
1 rex became stressed and destroyed part of it's enclosure fencing, ran into the main park area and killed all the cleaners.
The other 4 rexes wandered happily into the main park area as the stressed rex made a hole in the acro enclosure, the acro's ran into the raptor enclosure after the stressed rex killed one of the acro's.
The 4 acros where killed by the stressed rex and the 4 other rexes after being beaten-up badly in fights, the stressed rex died after it kept hitting itself on the fence.
The 4 remaining rexes ate the raptors that where in the main park area and several visitors, the remaining raptors lived for their expected lifespan of 3 years.
I then made an island with 50 T.rex's, 5 acros and 5 allosaurus.
A twister struck the park and destroyed a section of the raptor enclosure (which was half the size of the island), about 25 raptors escaped and lived in hiding.
1 rex became stressed and destroyed part of it's enclosure fencing, ran into the main park area and killed all the cleaners.
The other 4 rexes wandered happily into the main park area as the stressed rex made a hole in the acro enclosure, the acro's ran into the raptor enclosure after the stressed rex killed one of the acro's.
The 4 acros where killed by the stressed rex and the 4 other rexes after being beaten-up badly in fights, the stressed rex died after it kept hitting itself on the fence.
The 4 remaining rexes ate the raptors that where in the main park area and several visitors, the remaining raptors lived for their expected lifespan of 3 years.
I then made an island with 50 T.rex's, 5 acros and 5 allosaurus.
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One time in my park a spinosaurus brock out of its cage and everything happend sofast first its cage then the acrocantosaurus cage and then a twister hit the island and brock the t.rex's cage! Whats whorse my 23 carcarodontosaurus all got stresed by an axadentel cheat code called rampage time and are eating everybody alive im loosing millons of dollers and what do I do Isit back and enjoy the chaos while swithing it to emergency mode of corse but then the twister turned around [to think it would stop by now] and was heading for my t.rex whow was fighting not 1 not 2 not 5 but 7 of my most visous dinosaurs [including 5 carcarodontosaurus 2 spinosaurus and 1 acrocanthosaurus!!!!!!!!]this my freinds is total chaos.so the twister disaperd for some strange reson but it wasnt over the other 18 carcaradontosaurus came and watched the trex fall to the grownd theyused their power and might to push aside [literley kill] the others the eat the dead t.rex to clam their victory but the dont now the hunters are now the hunted for thecarcarodontosaurus killed an ouranosaur and fooleshly left a sent and that night they had an unexpekted visetor while they went to sleep they came 40 feet long 1 foot tooth you geused it t.rex 16 teen of them you see Idid say Ionly created one but I didnt tell you my island is full of surprises so althogh there were more carcarodontosaurus they had a advantege the carcarodontosaurus were sleeping so it was easy picking for the rex's and at frist 16 carcarodontosaurus died but then when the others woke up they kiled 15 rexs and the t.rexs killed all the carcarodontosaurus all but one and it 2 carnovors one the island 1 rex 1 carcardon it was a fight to the finish first the t.rex bit the carcarodon on the neck but it shoock free then quicly ramed the t.rex shot after shot the trex finaly grabed the carcarodons neck long enogh to kill it and with one last cry the carcarodon fell ded thus the trex cllamed himself king not to menchen made me worck my freekin @#$&*% to fix the park!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and what ever happend to that twister uho Im sorry I asked um gotta gow OK. /blink.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":blink:" border="0" alt="blink.gif" />
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roar!!!!!!!!!!!! ,
what was that
,its a trex
no! it sounds bigger
Save the salmon
what was that
,its a trex
no! it sounds bigger
Save the salmon
- Aquatic_Spinosaurus
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I set 25 raptors into an enclosure, what was so special about this enclosure?
It had a glitch on it, a BIG one.
Part of the island was blurred and the floor was rising up into the sky, every time I tried to flatten this part of land the cost would be in it's billions!
Even with mountains!
Whenever a dinosaur walked into this strange blur it would re-appear elsewhere on the island.
My raptors walked into this 'warp-pit' and they where all scattered around the island.
several landed in the herbovoir enclosure and where killed by Ankylosaurus and Styracosaurus.
The other raptors landed in the park visito center area, killed many vistors and then all the cleaners.
My rex got stressed and busted into the raptor enclosure, got warped to the visitor center and killed all the raptors there, ran back into the raptor pen and was warped into the albertosaurus pen.
It killed 2 of the 4 albertosaurs and ran back into the warpy---thingy.
It was transported to the Ranger station island, which is impossible for a dinosaur to get on to and off of on it's own.
The rex got stuck and died of a seizure, my albertosaurus killed lots of visitors, where warped to the herbivoir enclosure and killed almost every herbivoir but the ankylosaurus, until a twister struck the park and went through the warpy---thingy and crashed the game.
Yay.
It had a glitch on it, a BIG one.
Part of the island was blurred and the floor was rising up into the sky, every time I tried to flatten this part of land the cost would be in it's billions!
Even with mountains!
Whenever a dinosaur walked into this strange blur it would re-appear elsewhere on the island.
My raptors walked into this 'warp-pit' and they where all scattered around the island.
several landed in the herbovoir enclosure and where killed by Ankylosaurus and Styracosaurus.
The other raptors landed in the park visito center area, killed many vistors and then all the cleaners.
My rex got stressed and busted into the raptor enclosure, got warped to the visitor center and killed all the raptors there, ran back into the raptor pen and was warped into the albertosaurus pen.
It killed 2 of the 4 albertosaurs and ran back into the warpy---thingy.
It was transported to the Ranger station island, which is impossible for a dinosaur to get on to and off of on it's own.
The rex got stuck and died of a seizure, my albertosaurus killed lots of visitors, where warped to the herbivoir enclosure and killed almost every herbivoir but the ankylosaurus, until a twister struck the park and went through the warpy---thingy and crashed the game.
Yay.